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Commented on Persephone Is Rising:
   "Another powerful poem. I love the imagery."
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5 years ago

Commented on Persephone Is Rising:
   "So beautiful and inspiring."
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5 years ago

Commented on Persephone Is Rising:
   "Lovely! This is powerful stuff."
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5 years ago

Commented on Fragments of Fear:
   "Interesting; I don't think I've ever read a story structured backward before. It was fascinating to watch the reveals unfold in reverse."
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5 years ago

Commented on Morningland:
   "Oof, Earth's execution scene was intense! I got goosebumps. It was interesting to get a deeper look into the protagonist's head - I like how the story doesn't shy away from the difficult reality of what he's feeling."
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5 years ago

Commented on Morningland:
   "A great introduction! It found that rare balance between starting "in medias res" and still feeling grounded. It's well written and the imagery is evocative and easy to visualize. The concept seems like an imaginative take on post-apocalyptic sci-fi. Looking forward to reading more!"
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5 years ago

Commented on Lot 149:
   "Eerie stuff so far. Some of the imagery, like the bathtub scene, was particularly evocative. The whole thing portrays the "ick" factor that would surely come from moving into an old house, which a lot of stories gloss over. The mother and son relationship is also well done."
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5 years ago

Commented on Mouths of the Dark:
   "Creepy so far. I like the journal format. It's fascinating to watch the protagonist's mental state shift toward the visitors."
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5 years ago

Commented on Fragments of Fear:
   "A chilling short! Modern but poetic. Looking forward to reading more of these."
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5 years ago

Commented on Elwin's Banishment:
   "Cool concept! I'd suggest watching for consistency with the tenses, but this was an immersive and intriguing introduction."
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5 years ago